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Title: Mod. App.


Hwaunt - December 26, 2007 05:52 PM (GMT)
Which position are you interested in: Mod, Spriter, or both?
Mod.

Why do you want to be a Mod and/or Spriter?
Well, I try for the position on some sites that I do get. I have made several sites that were closed when my friend died sadly. I try to help people as much as possible and try to make the best out of knowing them. I am online very often for members who are also online to Role Play with.


What makes you think you deserve the job?
As I said I'm online often and took a spelling/grammar classes. After most sites close/are abandon I look after them until there is nothing left and move on and lately I have no were to go so I’ll dedicate most of my time here.

What experience if any do you have in this area?
I've created my own sites ' Eevee’s Poke venture' I am a member on some site just like this one. I have good life and friendship skills, and allot of patience.


Example(s):


QUOTE
Happy as a Blissey, I trotted through the fields. This was it. Today would finally be the day that the Pokémon I had adored for so long would finally become mine! I would make sure of it! Now if only I could find him...

o.o Wait.. I don't remember that tree.... or that bush...
.....
;_; "WHERE AM I!?"


Lying down in the grass you flatten yourself to the ground, trying not to be seen. Sniffing twice you try and recall this scent but, it is unfamiliar in many ways. As it starts to rain you try and remember what you saw earlier in the day. Always being a strong thinker it would take much more than this to scare you.

A growlith passes by seeming to know exactly were he's head. Not seeming to notice you, good thing you were so skinny. But after awhile he catch's your scent and turns around. Just as it happens he notices you and comes charging at you

“This is my land!"

He yowls.



((I hope you don't mind me writing one of my own for exstra refrance))

Clever and sly, I crept along to the den. Hopefully the trainers had gone and my brother had returned. But, regretfully I tripped in a hole giving away my whereabouts with a terrified yelp I had to run back into the bramble were I cowered in fear. It was a horrible day when trainers took the path up to the river where the den was. All the Pokemon would disappear in fear of being caught and taken. Earlier that week a Hybrid had been caught while letting down there guard. Since then every Eon was terrified not to mention the big commotion that the new poke center was bringing.

Hours passed and it had started to drizzle. Well it only felt like drizzle while hidden deep in the thorny bramble bushes. When the rain had stopped, with my tail low I crept slowly back to the den and rushed inside.

“Miko Miko!"

I called for my brother but only the whistling wind at my ears could be heard. Some Hybrid that had come out of hiding, came into to see what all the noise was about. An elderly Flareon/Umbreon Hybrid came over and whispered in my ear

“I’m sorry Shilow, he was caught"

Sorrow washed over me as the words soaked right in. I felt as if I was unable to fly. Like my wings were pulled back and rubber banded together. I pushed the elder away with my tail, I wanted to be alone right now and nothing would change that but Miko. 'He was a few months older and much wiser how could he be caught? What if he's happy? How can he be happy with me in such pain?’ I though, curling into a ball and starting to cry. It was only the end of the beginning.

Heart of Thorns - December 26, 2007 07:32 PM (GMT)
I'm not sure what to say on your spelling/grammar. xD It's so beautiful, and then boom. o.o' Really bad mistake. Then back to perfect.. perfect.. perfect... BLAH!! X_X.. perfect.. xD Lol. Still, it's pretty good. :3 Two things in particular you'll probably need later: "A lot" is two words, and you misspelled Growlithe. X_x Also, Pokémon species names are always capitalized.

The mod is pretty good, though I'm afraid the extra won't help or hurt you. People often write differently alone than as a mod.

I'd put in a good word, except your reply is a bit too controlling of the character. Just sniffing (though most people tend to with that example) is borderline, but having her lay down and in such a specific way as well? That's a bit much.

You have very good potential. :3 I think I'm going to put a restriction on Mod apps though. (It won't affect you, since you're here before. So don't worry.) Since it seems a lot of first tries at modship have this control problem, I think I'll see what other staff thinks of making mod applicants have at least 20 posts or so first, so they have a chance to see first-hand more how the RP style is here. :3

:3 Like I said though, that won't affect you, and you have good potential. ^_^ A really active and enthusiastic mod is always a good thing. Try either editing that reply or attempting the other example, and I'm sure you'll be in in no time. :3

Hwaunt - December 26, 2007 07:50 PM (GMT)
Thank you. I think I’ll give another example a try in a second. As for the spelling/grammar, I'm learning everyday. I can't say every mods. perfect. As for the controlling, I’ll think about that when I do my next example. I think I have a good grip on how your Rp style is here, I came from Sunerion Isle. Just look at my next example, and let me know.

Next Example:

QUOTE
The rain drops fell like tears upon me, as if even the clouds were lamenting my loss. How could I lose? I had the advantage. Everything was going so well.. But then, in a moment, it was over. I had lost the battle, and my mate. It seemed as though nothing mattered anymore. Nothing even existed.. Nothing but me and the rain..


But surely your luck had to come back right? Wrong. Soon the clouds started to fade away. When you though nothing could be worse, it was now only you. The light started to brighten, sunrise was here. A squeal of excitement came from some near by kits playing in the meadow. When a great roar interrupted them and the squeals became mewls of fright. When the Earth began to shake under you, the kits ran away. A cloud of dust puffed up in front of you and there was no way to see anything.

Heart of Thorns - December 26, 2007 08:35 PM (GMT)
:D Nice!! The suspense! The anguish! The.. um.. other stuff.. xD I know if that were my reply, I'd go crazy, because there isn't a lot to be done reply-wise, but it's still good, cuz I'd know it would be leading into something awesome. x3 Fwee!!

Now just wait for Tasha or Navy I guess.. '^_^; I can't officially approve you anymore, lol.

FWEE!! :D Sunerion!

Hwaunt - December 26, 2007 08:38 PM (GMT)
Ok I guess I'll stay online and wait 'caus I have nothing better to do. Thanks so much, I tried... If that really were one of my post the next thing coming would be a big tornado and you'd have to save one of the kits that gets caught in it.

Goddess of Legends - December 26, 2007 11:39 PM (GMT)
She's right. This is an excellent application. ^^ Welcome to the Mod Team. :3

Hwaunt - December 26, 2007 11:43 PM (GMT)
Thank you very much. I'll close this as my offical first mod. act!




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